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Posted by ZeeAk - May 22nd, 2008


The mighty Amazon rainforest. It stretched for hundreds of miles, like a green gargantuan stain on the face of the Earth. Hovering over it, at about an altitude of roughly 12 000 ft was a Bell 430, a commercial helicopter, manufactured in 1996; one of only 123. 13 years, and thousands of dollars in upkeep later, it still flew.

Over 6 hours of travel in said Bell 430 had tired the passengers. The pilot stared dutifully out the cockpit window. Jasan was wide awake in the passenger area. The passenger area was stripped bare; only two beds nailed to the floor for Jasan and his partner. He sat on his bed; it was stiff and uncomfortable. His back ached every time he slept on it. Still, some sleep was better than none.

"Descending." The helicopter's custom built PA system dinged. "Door opening." Jasan faced the speakers, embedded in the floor of the chopper. That, at least, was unique. The door to the cockpit opened, and the co-pilot strode out, stretching his legs. Jasan's partner, Deacon, awoke with a huge yawn. Eyes fluttering, he was still tired. The sleepy man sat on his bed also, staring into Jasan's eyes.

The eye contact lasted a mere moment. Deacon turned and grabbed onto a latch in the wall. Above it was a grappling hook, for easy escape. Or, Jasan reflected, for pulling unlucky enemy men toward you. Jasan stood, and stretched his arms, himself still tired, and slightly sore. His arm reached out and opened a locker beside him. It contained a gun; his prized M16A4. A silencer was affixed to its barrel. Grabbing it, Jasan stepped toward the door, as it opened.

Wind hit Jasan hard, and he stepped back. Suddenly, he was cold. The buffeting wind, combined with the cold Amazon atmosphere was penetrating Jasan's thing singlet easily. His khaki pants were providing more heat and comfort though. The helicopter's PA dinged again. "Second door opening." They were prerecorded, digital voices. Cold and emotionless.

The opening of the second door was also accompanied by an influx of cold. Jasan began to shiver, outwardly. Deacon stood, also, covered by his light, fleece blanket. "Watch that doesn't fly out." The co-pilot chuckled. Deacon turned to face him. "Huh?" He yelled.

As they watched the endless expanse of green, admiring the river that seemed almost carved into the landscape, a tiny contrail of smoke rose high into the air, almost to their altitude. Jasan squinted. "What the hell is that?" The co-pilot stepped toward, seemingly unaffected by the cold. Jasan pointed. "I'm not su-"

Suddenly, the tip of the contrail exploded. No fireball. Just a massive shock wave. The air seemed to split like the ocean. Trees beneath the contrail were uprooted and flung around the area. In an instant, 100 square feet of forest was cleared. But the wave didn't stop. It lost power on the ground almost immediately after the 100 foot radius. But not in the air.

The wave struck the chopper, and the cockpit glass shattered. Forsted fragments of glass bombarded the pilot. In the same moment, the chopper was thrust backwards, it's nose rising higher than the back. As the wave passed, it fell back down. But the damage was done. Deacon was sunsteady on his feet in a helicopter as it was. As the wave struck, he was flung sideways. With both doors open, he couldn't stop himself.

Deacon fell back onto his left foot. His right hand reached out for something to grab; there was nothing. The co-pilot reached out, but too late. Deacon's blanket caught a guts of wind, and he was dragged further backwards. Jasan turned to watch his friend get flung from the helicopter, out into the cold Amazon air.

The first thing that hit Deacon was the cold. Winter, it seemed, had settled on the Amazon rainforest like a cold, harsh behemoth. The air was buffeting him, hard. Suddenly, drops of water fell from the sky. In Australia, rain falls slowly at first. Then gets faster and faster. In the Amazon, it falls in one downpour. The rain pelted Deacon hard. Then he realised he was falling. "God!" He spat. Deacon panicked, adrenalin pumping through his frozen veins. Frantically, he searched for something, anything. Then he found it; his hand hit it hard. The pneumatic grappling hook.

Hurriedly, he unfastened the hook from his belt, and held tight. Squeezing the trigger, he looked down. Gasping, and rain stinging his face, he looked back up. To his surprise, the Bell 430 was lowering itself down toward him. Jasan stood in the open door, rain pelting him as well. The wind and the rain made for an unbearable combination. Jasan's voice came to him through a tiny earpiece he'd had inserted three hours earlier. "Fire it now!" He screamed. In the chopper, the co-pilot, still in the centre of the chopper, and mostly dry, tapped Jasan's shoulder, and his arm was pelted with freezing rain. "Uh.." All Deacon heard was the mutter.

Without a second thought, he fired the hook. It soared overhead in a marvellous arc. The air was becoming colder and colder as he fell, and the rain likened itself to frozen pin missiles. The first struck Deacon's face, and he cringed. The pain was extreme. The Bell continued to descend. Suddenly, the hook punched into the helo's stomach. Horrified, he watched it fall limp out the other side. Deacon swore, loudly, over the pouring rain. Then, quickly, it retracted and got caught.

"What!" Jasan yelled to the co-pilot, striking the man with fear. "Look." He said quietly, pointing. Then, Jasan saw the tensile rope of the grappling hook line the floor on the chopper. He kneeled, as it began to reel back. He hadn't even looked past the co-pilot's hand. The hook clamped on the wet underbelly of the helicopter. A loud groaning noise filled the tense air. "The shi-?" The co-pilot asked, cut off mid-sentence, as the grappling hook came loose, and slammed into his chest. The hook burst open, it's claws sticking into the co-pilot's body. Screaming with agony, he began to be pulled backwards.

Deacon felt the tug, and his arms felt as though they had been torn from their sockets. They nearly had. Then the hook slipped. He fell once more, horror overwhelming his body. He stopped again, and one of his shoulder's rippled in pain. "Jasan!" He screamed over the comm. "What'd I catch?" No reply for a second. The static. Then Jasan's voice, accompanied by a pained groan. "The co-pilot."

Deacon's eyes grew wide. No man could hold the hook in himself for very long. Nor could a corpse. He had two choices. Climb now, or let go. He didn't make a choice. He didn't have time. The hook came losse once again, and he fell a little. There was still a tug, however.

Water now lined the floor of the chopper. Blood mingled with it, dripping off in some places. It was a gruesome sight. Jasan now held the rope in his hand, dragging it toward the nearest bolted-down object. Deacon's bed. Slowly, he stepped one foot at a time, toward the bed. The wind lashed the chopper. For all they knew, no-one was piloting it. But there was someone. Though, he was bleeding severely. His blood covered the controls, dripping from wounds in his hands that had been received from the explosion of glass. Every movement was painful. But he knew Deacon had fallen, and he knew he had to save him.

Deacon just held onto the rope with one arm; his right shoulder had been severely damaged in the fall. Jasan was sweating like crazy, the huge weight on the end of the rope was a struggle. The rain was soaking Deacon to the bone, and he was becoming heavier with every drop. Several red lines marked his body; areas where the frozen missiles had bombarded him. The cold was almost unbearable. Shivering uncontrollably, he looked back up. He was slowly coming ever closer.

Jasan breathed heavily, and the co-pilot watched him struggle. Running out of breath and energy himself, he stood weakly, leaning against the wall to the pilot's cabin. Four red blotches of blood stained his shirt, and pain racked his body. A huge gust of wind entered the helicopter and turned the world into chaos. Hidden flaps burst open, and supplies swirled around the cockpit. The pilot's door burst open, and the chopper veered dangerously left. "Fu-!" Jasan began, as the slipped on the wet floor. He fell hard, landing on his chest. He grunted, trying to vent the pain. He felt the rope pull taught, and he began sliding, unable to stop himself. He had to let go. Either way, Deacon would die. Desperate, and paining, Jasan opened his hand wide, and the hook slid.

Deacon felt the rope fall completely loose, and knew there was no going back. In his teeth he held the blanket that had been the cause of this falling. He was breathing through his nose, and was shivering violently. The rope in his hand began to fall, and so did he. He'd never been more scared in his life. Free-falling at 10, 000 feet, with only the Amazon rainforest beneath him. And only a blanket and useless hook to accompany him. He shut his eyes.

Jasan stood immediately, ignoring the pain, and grabbed a nearby cloth. The helicopter was still a scene of chaos. Leaning against the wall for support, he stepped toward the co-pilot, now free of the rope. In the wind, a flap ahead of him opened, and smashed hard into the wall, centimetres from his face. Jasan slipped again, his right knee hitting the metallic floor. He grunted. The co-pilot groaned, and stepped forward. He was too dizzy. Blood stained his shirt.

Still holding the cloth, Jasan stood again. Rain buffeted the two men. The cloth was wet and heavy. But he made it. Jasan stepped right next to the co-pilot. "Shirt, off, now." Puzzled, the co-pilot followed his orders. Jasan quickly wrapped the cloth around him, tight. The blood pooled on the cloth, now. But eventually, it would stop the flow of the blood, and make it clot. "Now, what did you want me to look at?" Jasan asked. The co-pilot pointed. "Oh God.."

Another white smoke contrail. Then, the tip exploded. Jasan dived for one of the doors, and grabbed the handle. As the huge sonic wave closed in, he slammed the huge steel door shut. "The other one!" He screamed. The co-pilot turned, but too late. The wave slammed into the chopper. Already on an angle, the Bell 430 began to fall.

"Close that damn door!" Jasan screamed. The co-pilot ran for the door, and slipped on the wet floor. The chopper spun in a circle, slowly heading for the forest floor. Jasan sprinted across the cabin, leaping over the co-pilot and slamming into the door. His right arm throbbed, and he grabbed the door hinge with his left hand. "Help!" Pulling hard, he shut the door. "Drop!" He screamed.

Both men hit the ground. Anything that wasn't screwed down was spiralling through the air. A loud screeching filled the air. "What the hell is that?" Almost in response, one of the beds came off it's hinges, and smashed into the wall near the pilot's cabin. "Stay down!" The helicopter kept spiralling. Suddenly, it became shaking violently. The blades could be heard constantly slicing through something thick. Virgin wood; untouched rainforest.

Jasan stood, and tried to walk. Losing his footing, he took a huge step toward the pilot's cabin. The chopper hit a huge fallen tree trunk. The entire helo buckled, and tipped forward. The co-pilot slid into the nearest wall, as the chopper began to dive nose first. Taken completely off guard, Jasan slipped into the pilot's cabin. There sat the pilot, his hands and controls bloodied. Jasan hit the control panel. Despite the pain, he groaned. "How high off the ground are we?" The pilot strained to see his companion. "100 feet."

"Out, now!" Jasan tore the pilot from his seat, and began dragging him up the chopper. Now on a dangerous angle, the chopper was headed straight for the ground. "How long 'til collision?" Jasan yelled, the pilot now crawling beside him. "Three."
"What?!?!"
"Two."
"Co-pilot, move your ass!!!!"
"One."
All three men leapt for the rear of the chopper.

The Bell 430 didn't hit the hard ground. It hit even harder river. The already shattered windscreen stood no chance. Neither did the cockpit. Crushed almost instantly, Jasan, the pilot and co-pilot were all huddled together in a group at the rear of the chopper. Jasan held his gun, the M16A4. The co-pilot had Deacon's M4 Carbine. An ACOG scope rested comfortably on top. Everything else was the site of pure chaos. Bent and buckled metal. Explosions erupted from several core components of the Bell 430. It's blades, already damaged from the slicing on the way down, were completely buckled and smashed. Water burst into the cockpit and spilled out into main cabin. The right-side door was completely smashed open, torn down the middle by a huge tree. Jasan recognised nature's power. It could always destroy anything man made. But those contrail bombs. Were they after him, or for the purely commercial purpose of tree felling. Either way.

All three of the men were bloodied, bruised and totally exhausted. Jasan had cuts from the glass in the cockpit, the co-pilot had the holes from the grappling hook and the pilot had the slices and lacerations from the glass explosion. A small trickle of blood marked his face. Water kept gushing into the sinking Bell. Huddled up in the very back corner of the helicopter, all they could do was wait, and hope.

Suddenly, the chopper hit the bottom of the river. It lurched forward slightly, then stopped. They were safe. Unaware of the dangers of the Amazon's waters, Jasan sprinted forward, and slammed the cockpit door shut. No surprises. The destroyed right wall lay angled into the air. In the cabin, the water sloshed forward and back, and crystal clear, with the motion of the chopper. A warm, tropical air filled the chaotic area.

Jasan stood thigh deep in the cold, beautiful water. It sloshed at his feet, soothing his wounds. His legs were paining more severely; intensified by the healing properties of water. The liquid cleaned the gashes and soothed his legs, numbing the veins. He sat down in it, almost completely immersed, and lay his head back, wetting his hair. There was nothing quite as refreshing.

The pilot, bleeding and sore joined his friend. Groaning, he also sat himself down. Jasan closed his eyes and kept his hair under the water. "Names?" He asked. The pilot also shut his eyes, and took a full body dip, for a second. Resurfacing, he addressed Jasan's question. "Matthew. The other guy is Carlos." Jasan nodded.

The co-pilot ignored the water, and began to scavenge the wreckage. Huge pieces of shrapnel lined the chopper's main cabin. Official looking papers were scattered across the floor. Jasan stood, and left the water and headed for the right hand door. Suddenly, a huge burst of flame erupted from the cockpit.

Water gushed into the stomach of the steel behemoth. A huge alligator, carried by the tide, swept into the cockpit. It's bulky frame couldn't fit through the tiny corridor, built for humans. Carlos was stunned, momentarily. He sighed. More chaos. All three men leapt into action almost immediately. But, everything went wrong. Another huge burst of fire and shrapnel erupted from the left side of the chopper. It came from within the pilot's cabin. Essentially the entire part was torn open, freeing up the space of the deadly alligator. The flames lightly scorched the huge beast's scales. It didn't seem concerned.

It floated lazily on a tiny wave. It's eyes flickered gently. A false sense of security. Lovely. Jasan, still holding his gun, swam toward his tiny locker; a section built into the chopper itself. The door was torn off, and some scrap metal rested on it's hinges. But, still magentically fastened, was his knife. A huge hunting knife. Pressing the button in the centre of the magnet device, it came free. Right as the gator lunged. Knees bent, and feet planted on the wall, Jasan kicked away. The huge beast flew straight past him, coming to a grinding halt right in front of the wall, and then swimming lazily. Jasan gasped. Air. He needed air. The water was flowing in like crazy now. Barely a metre of space sat uselessly between the air and the chopper's roof. He didn't have much time. Kicking frantically, he broke the surface. Carlos was huddled right up against the rear section, still dry. His wounds would have seemed to ignite themselves on fire had he touched the water. Matthew surfaced near him. "Gator." Was all he said. Jasan nodded, watching the animal's raw strength and massive bulk carve effortlessly through the pristine water. Another huge burst of flame. The entire left side of the chopper fell away, heated intensely.

Most of the open space was filling with water. In about five seconds, they'd be trapped. Panicking, Jasan kicked harder and faster. Beneath the aquatic chaos, the alligator felt Jasan's kicking. It turned, and in the space of a second, rushed forward. Unable to stop the charging beast, Jasan simply dived under, heading straight down. He narrowly missed the beast's stomach, as it broke the surface. What it didn't know, however, was who held the knife. In the single spare second, Jasan threw the sheathed knife to Matthew, who now held it, unsheathed and glinting, in his hand. Without a pause for thought, he thrust down, with tremendous force. The blade pierced the alligator's brain, and it died instantly. Eyes wide, and blood leaking from the hole in it's head, the corpse of the massive beast was floating harmlessly.

Carlos felt the panels behind him rumbling, and he stepped forward. The water was lapping at his feet. Then, the entire tail section fell away, leading to a three- or four-foot drop to solid ground. Jasan watched it drop. Surfacing in a bare fourteen centimetres of water, he called to Matt. "Out, now!" He yelled, pointing. Beneath the water, the pilot nodded, and began swimming. His head pressing hard against the roof, and struggling for air, he dived. Carlos stood in the gap, not willing to jump onto super-heated metal. No-one blamed him. Simply because there was no-one there to do the blaming. Jasan and Matt surfaced behind him. They trekked out of the watter slowly, like something out of Pirates of the Caribbean, water falling in rivulets off their faces. "Go!" Jasan called. "Hot." Was Carlos' single word reply. Pushing him out of the way, Jasan threw off his shirt, scrunched in into a ball, and threw it at the large metal strip. The cold water hit the hot metal, and steam poured out from the shirt. Matthew did the same, with the same effect. "Jump."

The three men all leapt simultaneously. Landing on Jasan's now outstretched shirt, they leapt over the metal and onto the green grass. All they could do now was watch the Bell 430, after 13 years of excellent performance fall to nature's raw power. Nothing quite like it, Jasan thought. Sprawled on his back, head cocked up to watch the chopper, he looked around. The area was, certainly, a massive clearing. But it was what was at the far end that puzzled him. A cave. Huge, and with a circular shaped entrance, it was decorated with carvings. "Look." He said, sitting upright. It was about 30 metres away. The three men stood, and began walking, slowly. Only now, in a moment of peace, did they realize how tired they were. Carlos' wounds had stopped bleeding, yet not paining. Jasan felt his cuts and grazes flaming up occassionally. Matthew simply ignored the pain of his. A moment later, they were up against the wall, staring at the glyphs, completely dumbstruck. They were Aztecs symbols.

"Jesus.' the three men were standing in complete awe. "The final resting place of the Aztecs." Matthew stroked one of the carvings. An air of mystery emanated from the cave, like no-one had set foot in here for over 300 years. "In." The three men ducked in, and stood tall. Behind them, the light of the light forest tried to penetrate the obscene blackness, yet failed miserably. Ahead of them, was nothing they could see. Only black. They kept walking, arms flailing out in front, trying to grasp something, anything that will aid them.

The thin light completely vanished. Slightly nerve-racked, yet determined, the men pressed on. One more step, two, three, into possible oblivion. For all they know, it could be a trap. Four steps. Five. And light. Light flooded into their eyes as they kept walking. Twenty-three steps into the hellish black and there was light. It was unnatural, and slightly unnerving. Still walking, they rounded a corner. What they saw their took their breath away.

Gold. Piles upon piles of gold. TRILLIONS of dollars worth of the stuff. A small group of huts surrounded a tiny pit in the centre of the massive cavern. Two other gaping holes, exactly the same, pocked the cave. They were borne with Mayan and Incan symbols. Matthew examined the rim of this hole. More Aztecs carvings. "Oh my God." He said.

"This is THE final resting place of the Native Americans. But what about all this gold?" Only then did he realise how his voice carried. It echoed throughout the cavern. Anyone in here knew he was there now. "And the pit?" Then it hit him. The huts were of different make; Mayan, Incan and Aztec. The pit was a battle ground. The victors would have claim to the gold for a period of time. Then their would be more battle. Completely brutal, but strangely fair. The Aztecs, he guessed, were entitled to most of the gold.
Out of nowhere, three men stepped, all holding M4 Carbines. Jasan stepped back. Carlos ducked back into the dark. "Hello. Jasan."

"Deacon?" Jasan asked. "Sure enough." Deacon stepped into the light again, revealing his face. "How did you survive?" Deacon laughed at the comment. "Magic." He taunted. Suddenly serious, he held his Carbine to Jasan's head. "You see, Jasan. I've always envied you." He faced the gold. "So, as a final adieu, welcome to El Dorado." Jasan raised his hand. "So this is all about envy, then?" Deacon nodded.

Inside the rock cavern, two guns were fired, illuminating the cavern slightly. Shortly after, two corpses fell limp, to the ground.


Posted by ZeeAk - May 14th, 2008


An explosion rocked the dirtied, white Toyota Landcruiser. Debris hit the metal sides, denting it severely. The car swerved, as one of it's tyres was scorched by the flames. Smoke trailed behind the Landcruiser as it left the explosion remnants. The driver, a sniper by the name of Python, brought the car back under control. Another eruption of debris, smoke and flame shot up from the other side of the thin, dusty road. Dust, dirt and tiny pieces of rock pelted the car. The passenger, another sniper named Tread, lay two rifles;one battle and another an automatic. The AR-10 belonged to the driver, a more experienced soldier, and the M14 automatic rifle belonged to Tread.

A third explosion rocked the Landcruiser. Tread spun around, notcing a thin, white smoke contrail. "Shit! RPGs!" The driver kept his eyes on the road, as another RPG slammed into the dust. "If these are RPGs what were the other two?" Python screamed over the explosion. "Landmines!" Yelled back the passenger. "Fuck." Two more RPGs flew in from nearby rooftops, as they entered Baghdad. Machine guns also opened fire on the Landcruiser. An RPG launcer rested behind Tread's seat. "Grab the launcher!" Python screamed. Explosions erupted all around them, and bullets hammered the now bitumen road, and narrowly missing the car's tyres.

A corner. Python screamed to the passenger. "Hold on!" He hit the brakes. hard. The two back wheels of the Landcruiser died, momentarily. The front ones kept going, and the car drifted to the side. An RPG exploded beside the Landcruiser. Shaken and battered, Python slammed into the nearest building, shattering a window. Tread, unable to keep a hold of the RPG launcher, let it go. The launcher fell from the car window, hitting the bitumen. As they fell, the trigger bounced back. A grenade spiralled out of the barrel and bounced up, exploding on a building. Several men were blown off the building, and onto the street. Their screams punctured the air.

Python let go of the barkes, and sped forward. The explosions had stopped temporarily. The bullets hadn't. Ahead, Python saw a ramp, leading onto the rooftops of a low building. Right behind the house, was a huge hill. Foot flat on the accelerator, Python hit the ramp, and shot over the building.

Right beneath the short building was another, level with the one Python was now driving over. To Tread, it seemed suicidal. More and more bullets splintered the roofs around them. Python this the egde of the roof, bouncing onto the next. Driving straight, he could see another building several metres ahead. Just as they reached the end of the second roof, it exploded. Then, everything went rapidly, horribly wrong. The explosion tore up a huge chunk of the roof, and the LandCruiser jolted. Debris slammed into the windshield, cracking the fragile glass. Huge, frosted lines, all jagged rendered the windshield unable to see through.

"Shit!" Tread swore, loudly. The car left the rooftop awkwardly, on an angle. As they landed, the two left wheels took the brunt of the force. The LandCruiser almost bounced, as they left suspension snapped under the pressure. Python swore as well. The car fell onto it's right wheels, crippled. The entire vehicle was on an angle, supported on the left side by nothing but the tyre guard. But the bullets never relented. Nor did the new onslaught of explosions. Huge chunks of nearby buildings were destroyed by stray missiles. Missiles. Tread watched missile-men aim at the vehicle. "Python! Missiles!"

Several Stingers were from different areas around the city, and slammed into the nearby buildings, their co-ordinates falling short. The LandCruiser, beaten, battered and broken was about to die. But Python never gave up.

Around him, entire buildings erupted in spectacular shows of fire, smoke and debris. "Fire at them!" Python yelled to Tread.Gripping the wheel, his knuckles pure white, adrenaline fuelled the drive forward. Nothing but adrenaline. Tread could see it. And he knew what created adrenaline. Fear. The great Python was afraid.

On the ground, an Iraqi commander watched the LandCruiser press on, over the buildings, with explosion and bullets all around. Walls the vehicle collapsed, yet the determind driver kept going. Rotating around, on a helicopter's vision camera, he could see the frosted windshield. The driver couldn't see out of the windshield. So, he, the commander, had the complete advantage.

A nearby helicopter hovered lower than usual, prepping a missile. It would have one chance to get this shot perfect, or have the entire helicopter blasted out of the sky by remote explosives. The Iraqi reward for punishment. For seven seconds it waited, for the LandCruiser to make a fatal error. And finally, it did.

Unable to see, Python could only steer based on what he felt and heard. He couldn't have known there was a drop at the end of this building. But there was.

Suddenly, the helicopter opened fire, with the single missile. It took barely two seconds to hit it's target, but it worked.

Just as Python reached the halfway point of the roof, the edge exploded. "Shit!" He yelled, barely able to hear due to the explosion's proximity. He released his grip on the wheel, and suddenly the car veered left. As the roof collapsed, he slammed the left wall of the house. The impact pressed the hood of the LandCruiser inward. The back wall fell onto the very back of the LandCuirser, shearing away the boot door, and missing Tread's seat by inches. The front wall was blasted by a missile of some sorts, and obliterated. The debris spouna round the round, pounding the Toyota. Python ducked as soon as he heard the blast, hiding behind the steering wheel. Chunks of debris smashed the windshield completely, tearing all the glass from the sockets, leaving an empty space. The elite sniper could now see. His knuckles felt strange, as if they had locked up on him, but he had to keep going. Python reversed, as Tread hung onto his seat for dear life.

The LandCruiser reversed for two whole building lengths. It stopped when it slammed into the far wall. An explosive hit this wall, as well. It collapsed, right as the LandCruiser sped forward. It slammed into the forward wall, and broke straight through it. Turning to the left, and fighting a desperately losing battle with the steering wheel, Python turned out onto the street. Thousands of guns opened fire, and many thousands of bullets bounced around the road, dangerously close to the speeding vehicle. Still turning left, and trying to cross the street, Python still tried to fight. He knew that if he survived this ordeal; and the odds were resolutely stacked against him, he would have no energy to run or fight. Sweat covered his brow. He couldn't wipe it off or he would lose control. Tread, of his own accord, grabbed his automatic battle rifle, still resting on the floor of the LandCruiser and began to open fire. His accuracy was spot-on, and he shot the closest of the Iraqi soldiers. The deathtoll rose to five, now, with the three quick deaths.

Suddenly, however, something detonated on the road ahead. Flames licked at the hood of the Toyota, and bullets slammed into it's doors. One bullet missed Python's feet by inches. The explosion had torn up the road, creating a makeshift, bitumen ramp. Unable to stop, the LandCruiser hit the jump, and into the air.

Soaring, the Toyota slammed into the corner of a rooftop, landing on one wheel. Unable to support itself, the vehicle dropped of the edge, still continuing forward. Gunning it, right as the back wheel of the LandCruiser hit the roof's edge, the vehicle lurched forward. Try as he might, Python had completely lost control. Tread was about to fly out of the car, when he jumped forward. He jumped over the two second row of seats, and landed in a straight line, across them all. Deathly still, he just waited.

The LandCruiser bowled straight through the wall of the next building, at the same time as a huge missile slammed into the base. The two hits shook the building's foundations. The LandCruiser landed on it's left side, and rolled. The roof buckled, severely. Tread dived to the floor. Python attempted to unbuckle his seat belt. But it wouldn't come undone.

Python ducked low as he could, as the roof crumpled, barely inches from his head. The Totoyta kept rolling, slamming through the nearest wall, still with incredible speed. Tread was thrown from side to side of the car. His arms and legs were bruising, and his ribs were being battered. Python, out of energy, and desperate grabbed his knife from the glove box, while the car fell, sliced his seat belt, spun and dived. He landed on the second row of seats and rolled to the floor, clutching the seat lever, and pulled.

The LandCruiser slammed into the ground. Hard. The entire roof was destroyed; obliterated in a split-second. Tread's head hit the seat in front of the him as they landed. All the other seats were busted; torn apart and shredded by the raging metal. Nearby, the ground burst into a huge fireball. Dust rained down on the LandCruiser once again. The gunfire ceased. Both men were flat on the floor. To any outsiders, no man could have survived the absolute atrocity. The LandCruiser stopped it's constant rocking. Then there was silence. Nothing. No sounds. That was their chance.


Posted by ZeeAk - April 30th, 2008


Assassin's Creed

Trying to explain the big picture behind Assassin's Creed plot/storyline is hard. So I won't. You can discover it for yourself.

I WILL however, say that the plot is slightly confusing in places. Turns out, watching those un-freaking-skippable cutscenes actually helps after all.

The gameplay in Assassin's Creed features mostly *shock horror* killing. These killings can be executed in several brutal, or sometimes utterly silent ways. The combat is divided into two sections; low-profile and high-profile. Low-profile isn't COMBAT, as much as it IS silent assassinations. High-profile is barbaric, bloody fighting, with swords, throwing knives, and, occassionally, a good ol' fist fight.

Low-profile offers you the comfort of being able to (slowly) explore the entire city freely. That is, until later on in the game when the guards of Acre, Damascus and Jerusalem, become aware of your presence, due to repeated killings and open-crowded assassinations. High-profile, however, is for the gamer that prefers more hands-on, or, in this case, swords on, killing.

As the game progresse, Altair, the Assassin as whom you play, learns several skills and abilities. Some of these skills include Counter Kills, parries and regaining balance. Counter Kills can (and often will) involve brutal stabs, slices and cuts employed to execute guards (or maybe, in Masyaf, assassins) with ease.

Assassin's Creed is centred around the five major areas; most of them cities: Masyaf, the city of the Assassins, Damascus, built around a canal, Acre, the centre of the European occupation and Jerusalem, the Holy City. Each city has a distint theme; Acre has it's dark, grey walls and buildings. Damascus, with it's sun-baked mud buildings, and essentially a brown colour theme. Jerusalem is a combination of both; wood, walls and mud.

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Posted by ZeeAk - April 11th, 2008


So yea, I spent today using up my free month of Xbox Live Gold; first day.

And, I reckon I did pretty good.

I play ranked mainly; only played Social with my brother;Eternal Debut.

My Gamertag is ZeeAk.

Add me up sometime.

I'll mainly play Halo 3, CoD 4, Burnout Paradise and Dynasty Warriors 6.

Also, check out my Halo 3 Service Record. =D

Also, my Halo 3 File Share.


Posted by ZeeAk - April 2nd, 2008


The Pagani Zonda rested easily on the sunbaked dock. The nearby white-washed buildings and pools of salt water mixed with fresh, rain water were also lazily sitting on the concrete, placed against a gorgeous, Hawaiian backdrop; the sun falling beneath the sea. Michael Weston stepped of his boat; a Larson Cabrio 370 Day Cruiser. The white boat's black trim was eye-catching, if nothing else, and the square, steel anchor hovering restlessly over the concrete was glinting in the dying sun. It took several paces for Michael to reach his car, the Zonda. With barely a care, he had left it unlocked. Stopping, Michael looked around the dock once more. Something wasn't right. Several doves flew overhead, disappearing seconds later behind the extinct volcano. The dock was empty, aside from the boats occupying the marina berths, and the birds floating, tensed, on the water. Dinner time, Michael knew. Stepping into the Zonda, Michael drove off; the car was set to start immediately, courtesy of an old favour with an engineer friend. Driving onto the motorway, Michael began to speed. He was a billionaire on vacation. He deserved to.

The tunnel loomed ahead. Barely several meters stopped Michael from entering it. Suddenly, it exploded. Huge chunks of concrete debris was sent hurtling through the air. The volcano's hillside was peppered with the huge missiles. The fireball punched up into the sky. Michael began to reverse, looking into the rear-view mirror on the roof of his car. In the tiny mirror, another fireball loomed up. The explosion was seen before it was heard. Still, pieces of concrete rained down, and the tunnel collapsed in on itself. Over the radio, Michael heard someone else report a massive explosion on O'ahu's western side. They weren't wrong. The shockwave finally caught up with the sound, and the power of the explosive carried the Pagani, smashing into the hillside. Michael had time to open the door itself before he was thrown out by the force of the impact. The car smashed into oblivion. It was pulverized. From up here, he saw a single person climbing over the wreckage of the tunnel, jumping over gaps, climbing up other parts. Michael could also see the dock. Or, what was left. Every one of the boats were destroyed. There was nothing to signify them as marine vessels. Most of the concrete had been torn up, revealing a gaping hole with slanted down into the water.The water itself was now black with murk. But worse, was the fleet of barges slipping in the dock. A helicopter arose from beneath the hull. Its rotor blades began to spin rapidly, and it lifted.

A Japanese flag was waving in the deathly wind atop the bridge of the boat. The entire top of the hull of the Japanese barge began sliding forward. It reached the end of the hull and just dropped, forming a huge bridge. The very front of the boat began to fall as well, like an old fashioned castle bridge. Japanese man began to clamber out, followed by several vehicles. Michael watched as one of the men attached what seemed to be a machine gun. The Japanese had just bombed Hawai'i; twice! And now, they had come with machines of war.

--

The man that had been climbing the tunnel wreckage had reached the other end, and had seen the man sitting near the Pagani Zonda; or, what was left of it. Slowly the car was losing it's traction of the grassy volcano slope. "Oi! Move!" The man called out. Michael responded, and looked at him with a strange expression. "Car!" He yelled. Michael turned, as his vehicle began sliding; it's viciously sharp edges all potentially lethal. He did nothing but lay flat on his stomach, a second before the car flipped over him. Several minutes later, Michael sat on the edge of the street. Jasan, the man who had clambered all the way over the wreckage was an ex-Marine, in his late 20s. He'd already served in some of the most violent battles of the Iraq War. And survived, unlike many other thousands of soldiers; American and Iraqi. Jasan had taken in the situation, and, seemingly, had formulated a plan. He turned to the billionaire. "You done this before?" He asked, looking back to the several other barges. "Done what?" Michael asked, in reply. "You gotten any combat training before?"
"No."
"Any fight experience at all?"
"A little."
"Do you have hope?"

--

Climbing onto the tunnel wreckage for the second time, Michael looked back. Jasan knew, and turned to face his billionaire partner. "There's no going back. Not now." Michael nodded. He swallowed, as well, before returning to follow the mysterious stranger. Something gripped Michael as strange. "What about the helicopter?" He asked, stumbling over some debris. Jasan turned. "WHAT helicopter?" Michael shrugged. "The one that came out of the barge as it landed." Jasan punched the debris. He swore, loudly. Suddenly, Jasan's angry words were drowned out by the sounds of helicopter blades slicing through the air. "Dammit!" He yelled, effectively sprinting over the debris. "Get down!" He yelled out to Michael. The billionaire barely heard him, as he ran off, and as the helicopter drew closer. Several dark holes beckoned Michael to enter. THe helicopter was louder now, droning out all other sound. The hairs on Michael's neck raised. Acting impulsively, he slipped into a small crag in the debris, completely invisible to anything outside.


Posted by ZeeAk - March 12th, 2008


So yea, as you may have noticed with ArenA (or not.. =S), I'm starting to write littler, more objective-based stories.

I really wanna be able to make a few bucks outta my work, so if anyone's looking to purchase any of my work, be it present work, or work I can make specially for you, just gimme a PM, or message my Myspace:

http://www.myspace.com/zaceo


Posted by ZeeAk - March 11th, 2008


"There will be blood." A hard, wooden stick bearing a solid metal block rested against the wall. Next to it, a bloodied, holed shield. A simple, ragged cloak was draped over the shield, also blood-stained. Across the room, on a single, bare rack, rested a lonesome, cold helmet. Slowly, the prisoner stood. "I can tell." His deep voice echoed across the open, sparse hall. Several rotting, fleshy corpses were piled in a corner. The darkness was penetrated only by the small lantern the guard carried. The heavy gate separating the new combatant from the blisering hot sands, and the bloodlust of the fans, was shut indefinetely. The only other man in the hall was the gatekeeper; responsible for opening and shutting the gate. The guard's strong, bony hand slipped it's way onto the combatant's back. A simple thurst implied the message.

Several minutes later, the fresh warrior stood before the massive gate, ready for the ensuing bloodlust. The guard, satisified. The warrior was clad in the blood-stained cloak, bore the sledgehammer and the shield in his left, off, hand. "Ready?" The gatekeeper held the gat ewinch like his life depended on it. It probably did. The guard walked toward the warrior. "Have fun." The guard chuckled. Already, the new combatant had a plan. The first, weak rays of light crept into the dark hall, as the gate began to open. The warrior turned around, his deceitfully strong hand locking around the guard's wrist. The guard tried to pull away, to no avail. Fear gripped his eyes, despite being himself armed. The warrior was not even smug, or proud. He simply stood, prepared. The gate was half opened. Already, the survivors in the arena surged forward. The crowd roared. And the warrior acted.

With a single thrust, he threw the guard toward the men. The guard stumbled, collapsing at the attacker's feet. The warrior sprinted forward, bashing one of the attacker's in the skull. The warrior felt the man's skull shatter beneath the blow. The man instantly died. Limp, the corpse fell to the sand. Shocked by the sudden brutality, the crowd was deathly silent. The fresh combatant swung at another man. The sledgehammer bashed into the second man's shield. The force of the blow knocked the defender to the ground. The others were still fumbling with the guard, helping him regain his feet. The last thing the second an saw was a sledgehammer rushing toward his face.

The gate closed as the second man was instantly killed. Two men were dead already. The crowd roared with excitement. The warrior took another step and spun around, swinging the sledgehammer. He caught a third man in the gut, puncturing the man's arteries. It would take several minutes for him to die, but he would be unable to move. The man's limp, paralyzed body was flung backwards, and the warrior bought the sledgehammer back to his side. Two men left. The crowd was, literally, on the edge of their seats. This new warrior had slaughtered three men, in the space of fifteen seconds. The guard untangled himself from the other two men, as the first of the survivors faced the new warrior. Behind him, three, bloodless corpses. Fear filled all three pairs of eyes, as the man took slow, solemn steps. The sand seemed to give way to his movements, as if parting to his sheer power and raw brutality.

The fourth man took a step backwards, sub-consciously, into his ally. The fifth man pushed his partner toward the warrior. With a single, swift blow, the fourth man was bashed aside by the warrior's shield. The fifth, and final man cowered down, his shield covering his face. The warrior stopped walking. "'Ya scared?" The taunt rang loud and clear through the arena. The crowd, simultaneously held their collective breaths. One of the spectators coughed, and everyone heard. For a single, foreboding moment, silence hung over the bitter Roman arena.

The first blow was hard and swift, against the shield. The fifth men fell onto his back, dropping his shield. In the same moment, the man rolled over, and stood. Fear filled his eyes. The warrior took a single step forward, and slowly dragged his back foot through the sands, parting the sun baked grains like the waters of the Red Sea. The lone survivor stepped back again. With amazing speed the warrior leaped forward, following through with the sledgehammer. The weapon broke the man's arm, as he impulsively tried to block the blow, shield-less. Pain seared through the survivor's body. The bones hung loosely in his skin. The warrior stood over his victim. On their feet, the crowd screamed. "Blood! Blood! Blood!" The warrior turned, to face the guard. With a single step, the guard felt the raw weight of the sledgehammer annihilate his ribs. His blood vessels burst. With a silent scream, the guard grasped at the air for oxygen.

The warrior turned back to the sole survivor. "There will not be blood."


Posted by ZeeAk - January 19th, 2008


.: Chapter Uno :. The Escape

Jasan sat in the cold, steel cell, as time wasted away his body. Famished and thirsty, he felt death's cold embrace. He was serving a death sentence; but this punishment felt worse than death. Death controlled him, filled his emotions, controlled his actions, affected him, physically and mentally. He had committed murder, and as such, treated with a mental and emotional murder; a murder that left nothing but the shell of a man, driven by insane desire and lust for revenge. Above anything else, he would prefer condemnation; even the thought of living among free men seemed an atrocity he couldn't bare, and condemnation promised a confinement away from the tortures of capture, and imprisonment. Two thin rays of light entered the room, the darkness trying to fight them off; trying to capture Jasan totally. Those thin survivors among the lethal dark where the only way Jasan tracked time. Seventeen times they had faded, and re-appeared; seventeen days. Fatigue consumed Jasan's appearance; the starvation had taken it's tool. Several times he had been fed, for the guards, dressed in cloth completely, as to ensure total silence, left a leather tray, with a loaf of fresh bread, and a cold glass of water. One day, it happened thrice, and Jasan attacked the food, eating wolfishly. But this, what he felt now, sitting alone, was a different kind of hunger.

As the light began to fade, Jasan rolled his eyes. Another day; the eighteenth day of imprisonment, had just ended, and the eighteenth night began. As Jasan's weak, degrading eyes began to shut, he heard sound. A bullet. The crumple of a corpse; or a man knocked-out. A second bullet, and another, closer crumple. Several yells, and another two crumples. Four dead men; a quadruple homicide, in, supposedly, the most secure prison complex in the world. An explosion went off within the complex; possibly just outside Jasan's room. Light flooded the confinement, and Jasan tried to cover his eyes, to no avail; his hands were tied behind his back. Another explosion, and flames seeped into Jasan's room. The cold was instantly abolished, replaced with a searing heat. Jasan felt the flames lick at his face, even as he was right at the back of the room. For a single split second the flames engulfed Jasan; the ropes binding his hands were chared and scorched, essentally weakened. With all his diminishing strength, Jasan thrust his hands apart; the ropes gave way. Blood quickly rushed back, restoring long lost feeling. Guns erupted into a violent state of attack, and bullets killed more men; all prisoners, whose voice had long ago betrayed them. Weakly, Jasan stood, unknotting the thin ropes constricting his legs. It had been almost three weeks since Jasan had used his muscles; almost three weeks since he had killed. Some animal instinct gripped him, as he threw himself quickly into the corner of the room. Gruff voices shouting various mangled languages could be heard outside; just over the din of machine gun fire. Jasan stood up against the wall, his chest heaving. Suddenly, bullet splintered through the dark, scorched wall. A man, stupidly, stepped into the room, still firing. Jasan, his hand flat, like a fleshy blade, lashed out at the man. The blow caught the man's neck; bruising the jugular. Weak as he was, Jasan felt exhausted, and the blow was just another burden to bear. Instantly, the unconscious man crumpled. Time was of the essence; Jasan grabbed the man's gun, and, without checking whether he was dead or alive, fired a single shot into the man's head.

Another explosion; more heat. Air was scarce enough, without constant explosions, filling the corridor Jasan had been dragged; blind-folded, down eighteen nights ago, with smoke and debris. The heat had also become difficult to bear, the haze obscuring his vision. Without knowing, sweat was dripping from Jasan's face, dripping almost soundlessly in the loud corridor. For days, Jasan had gone without sound, sight or hearing. Now, he wanted it to go away. His eyes stung in the blistering heart. All he saw was the dead corpse of a man, and all he heard was the constant drumming of machine gun fire. Several difficult, never-ending minutes passed before the attackers realised they had a man down. His boots were all that could be seen; muddy and stained as they were. Light flooded the corridor; a strange occurence during the early night. A bare bulb hung from a suspended wire on the roof, swaying casually to and fro in the midst of ruthless violence. Suddenly, the firing ceased. Several feet began to step simultaneously. The rythmic chorus of feet ceased to be in time, as some men began to run; others to walk.

Jasan's breathing slowed almost to a halt, as fear gripped him. He was alone; against a strike force of experts. He had killed once; these men had killed hundreds of times, collectively. They were no strangers to triggers, knives, bullets and blood. Another step. Time grinded to a screeching halt; almost audible in Jasan's mind, as he rounded the corner. His finger hovered over the trigger for a split second; A split second too long. The other man opened fire. Jasan dropped the gun and turned to run. His loose, dirty, scorched shirt was no protection against the raw power of a bullet. The guns erupted all at the same moment; the sound loud in Jasan's ears. Another explosion; above him. Jasan felt the solid ground above him collapse, as more and more explosions tore through the ground. Debris collapsed from the roof, filling the air with dirt and dust as it landed, crashing. Still running, Jasan sheltered his eyes, covering them from the debris. Flames licked at his heels, as more debris collapsed, and more explosion went off. H could still hear the din of machine gun fire behind him; and now, above him. As he turned to look, he was horrified. The tunnel was sealed off; for tunnel it was. The light began to fade, and the cold return. The explosions had ceased; the dust and debris had settled. Still no fresh air, but Jasan had escaped. He stopped running, and walked back to the debris, exhausted completely. Amazed, he rested against a loose patch of dirt. Breathing heavily, he relaxed, lying back. The moonlight slowly replaced the sunlight over the next few minutes, and Jasan, eyes closed, opened his mouth; for the first time in almost three weeks. "I'm alive."

Jasan awoke; an eery, cold sunlight covering his body. Bright as it was, it provided no heat, no warmth. Despite the long, peaceful sleep, Jasan was exhausted. His muscles ached, his heart was pounding and his breathing was hard and heavy. Dirt had covered him during the night; a natural blanket Jasan was now grateful for. Cold, and alone, Jasan stepped in the musty morning light. Scorched, blackended ground surrounded a small pile of bodies. The guns belonging to the dead victims were scattered around their corpses, almost as grizzly reminder of their deaths. An MP5, a .45 Magnum and an AK-74 Grenadier lay unused and unclaimed near the corpses. Caution to the wind, Jasan stepped into the cold, Romanian winter, barely a singlet and boardshorts to protect him. The metal guns were cold against Jasan's hands, as he cocked them; bullets inside. With a piece of rope, he strapped the AK-74 and the MP5 to his back, and held the Magnum.

Several hoarse, deep voices carried through the emptiness, slicing the tension in half. Jasan was in the open, completely vulnerable. He had only barely survived the first burst of machine gun fire directed at him; and then, only by a miracle. He doubted he could survive another, out in the open, as he was. A few more voices, different to the first ones, pierced the cold air. A team of men, all armed, by the sounds of the gruff conversation Jasan could overhear. A small, tin box was the only nearby cover, in the open, dusty prison ground. "Shit!" As the men rounded the corner, Jasan flattened himself up against a nearby wall. Then men rounded the corner, all armed. The biggest of all the men had a large RPG launcher, of German make, strapped to his back. Jasan's breathing slowed to a crawl. Blood streamed one man's face, and Jasan inspected him carefully. He seemed familiar. There was a memory Jasan couldn't put his finger on. But, it was there. He knew this man, but he didn't know how. The thought left Jasan's mind as he saw tha assortment of weapons the men were carrying. They all carried light machine guns, mostly RPKs, one carried an FN Minimi, and several fragmentation grenades; M67s.

Jasan stepped into the dim light, AK-74 Grenadier at the ready. "Bitches!" He muttered, as he loaded a grenade into the lower-mounted launcher. One of the men turned in his direction, lining up his pistol. Jasan half-smiled. With a quick trigger finger, a grenade shot out of the Ak, bursting into flame and smoke. One of the man was engulfed in the blast, the others blinded and disgruntled. Ten men were too difficult to fight against. Instantly, Jasan sprinted in the direction of the gate. Bullets sliced through the smoke, forming large holes, through which the men watched as Jasan dived behind a truck. A man inside was laying motionless; whether dead or sleeping, or maybe unconscious was to be found out.


Posted by ZeeAk - January 7th, 2008


This is a special occasion, really.

For once, one of my news posts isn't a story.

Instead, it's too commemorate my BA!

Yes, Now I have one.

It's 3.46

I can start collabs.

Man, I feel awesome.


Posted by ZeeAk - November 28th, 2007


As Zac, Shawn, Alfie and I walked to the barrier, I kicked. To my surprised, it rocked back and forth, before I caught it. It was surprisingly light, and as Zac jumped it, a plan began formulating itself in my mind. Shawn jumped it as well, and I stayed put, running my hands up and down it's sides, smiling. "You're thinking." Zac stated, looking at my eyes. I nodded, clutching it. "And your plans are insane. But they work, miraculously." I nodded, once again, agreement overcoming my face. "And this one is gonna work best." The three of them all shot my strange glances. "If," I continued. "It's pulled off properly."

--

Almost a half hour later, our army stood amassed on the bridge. "This 'wall plan'", Zac began, sarcastically, "Is gonna work a storm! And we don't even know what it is yet!" Zac surrendered to my stubbornness. I smiled, ordering about twenty people to attach holds to the wall. Shawn watched in wonder, and Alfie stood, smoking. I spun around. "Smoking kills, you know?" I asked him. He took the cigarette out of his mouth, and chuckled, a thin wisp of grey smoke curling into the air. "So does war. And the fatality rate is much higher." He dropped the cigarette on the ground, and crushed it under his foot. Appreciatively, I nodded. "Thanks."

--

The holds attached, I assigned another twenty people to grab them. They all fulfilled this mundane task. "Lift!" I yelled. Together, on their own count, they lifted the bridge, easily. "One hand." I said. The bridge dropped several inches, but was still above the ground. "Lower." They lowered the bridge, until only their ankles showed. "Arm yourselves." I said, and they grabbed their guns. "Aim OVER the bridge." I ordered, again. They lifted the guns over the bridge. "Fire a single shot. One shot. Then stop." They all fired; some more than once. Suddenly, I heard the squelch of a bullet entering flesh, a dying scream. "Shit!" I yelled. The men holding the wall lowered their guns. "Forward!"

--

The men lifted the barrier, slowly waddling forward. I looked past the barrier, to the Japanese army charging up the bridge. In the last half hour we had readied ourselves. Huge metal sheets had been driven into the bridge, protecting most of us from most of the Japanese assault. Unfortunately, we couldn't move them. Suddenly, bullets began pounding the barrier, and we used the Japanese fortification against them. The heavily sheeted metal, bulletproof, but light, blocked all of the bullets. I stood, for only a second. But I saw enough, before diving behind shelter. Almost two hundred thousand Japanese soldiers charged at us, sprinting forward. Several men jumped to their feet. "Hold fire!" I screamed, and they hid behind cover. A sudden thought ran throuhg my head, and I began daydreaming. As I thought, deja vu swept over me. My thought returned, more powerful and realistic this time. "My name is Jasan Brown. I am the sole survivor of an attack on the Hawaiian island of O'ahu, leaving it's 900, 000 residents floating behind me."

--

The Japs all came into view now; their army stretching almost a mile long, in the confined bridge space. Men fought for space to fire, and only the front lines had room. The bullets kept relentlessly pounding the barrier. "Hold!" I said, once more, to affirm my command. The men were restless. Whispering, I counted down from three, over and over, expecting something to happen; anything. The men around me watched, as I counted down, expectantly. "Jasan!" He yelled, in desperation, not knowing what was happening on the other side. I nodded. "I know!" I yelled back. Three more seconds passed, as the gunfire mysteriously ceased. A Japanese head popped over the barrier. "Now! Fire!"

--

In a single moment, almost twenty thousand men stood, and opened fire. The Japanese taken completely by surprise. "Slam them!" I yelled at the men holding the barrier. They all nodded, and thrust the barrier forward, knocking the men at it to the ground. "Grenades!" I yelled, as I emptied out a clip. Thousands upon thousands of magazine were stockpiled around us. So were grenades. Suddenly, our army ducked momentarily. The Japs spent several precious seconds eyeing the numerous dead we had accumulated, as the injured began to be escorted from the front. A good tactic; but time consuming. "Up!" I yelled, confident everyone had grenades. Again, our army rose in a single, co-ordinated movement. At the same time, thousands of grenades flew overhead. Some were ejected from huge RPGs, at the back, while most were thrown. All well cleared the barrier, as we ducked once more, to reload. As the grenades exploded, the Japs realised the power of our unit. The grenades all exploded simultaneously. I noticed one man had a video camera, and was filming as we fought. "You'll make a killing." I said, chuckling, and became serious once more. "Bastard." I whispered. He looked at me, as I slammed a magazine into my gun. "Huh?!" He yelled, over the explosions. I grabbed the camera, and smashed in on the ground. This is warfare, not the media."

--

Several more minutes of intense gunfire passed. I crouched, ever still, my knees paining as I did. The men around me awaited my signal. Another explosion rocked the bridge, almost the twentieth in the past two minutes. A man stood, as bullets zoomed past his head. For a split second, the firing stopped, creating an eerie silence, where, for almost twenty minutes had been unstoppable gunfire. But the silence barely lasted. "Up!" I screamed, and again, my army pounced to their feet. "Stay!" I yelled, as all guns were lined up, ready to fire, while the Japs reloaded. "Fire at will!" Our guns suddenly erupted, and grenades flew overhead. The Japs were hit hard for a second or two, before retaliating. The man beside me watched the Japs break like toothpicks. He chuckled. "Encore?" He asked. I shook my head. "This isn't funny." I ducked behind the metal sheet, pulling him with me. "All you can see is men falling to the ground. All you can see is small red splatters." I paused. "As much as I hate these men, you are NOT the one out there, experiencing the real pain, the real blood, the sight of nineteen thousand, nine hundred and ninety nine brave men fighting for their family. For their country. "I doubt you'd want time to slow to a painful halt, as a bullet embedded itself into your body. I doubt you'd want to feel the pain as the bullet kills your nervous system slowly. And the blood pooling around you. That's when you know you're going to die. Death is never easy. Not for anyone. Japanese," I gestured to the Jap army, then to Zac. "Australian. Or even, "I swallowed, delving into the past. "Or even for Americans." The man smiled, chuckling. "Nice speech." He said, sarcastically. I slammed my gun against his bladder. "I know how to kill a man slowly. You will feel every drop of blood fight with the others near it to crawl helplessly out of your body. You will feel EVERYTHING." I said. He glared me in the eyes, placing his hand on the bridge. "Try me." He said, in Japanese. "SHIT!!!" I yelled, and pulled the trigger, the gun now aimed at the man's head. "Run!" I screamed. The men around me turned, and began to run. "Get off the bridge!" I yelled. The men at the barrier, turned and started to follow us, as we ran backwards, still firing, looking occasionally back. I looked over to the body, lying still on the ground, blood pooling around him. But his back was arched. It was a bomb. "No..." I said, to myself. It was a detonator. All along the bridge hundreds of flashing lights were beeping. "Keep running!" I screamed. In that moment, the Japanese soldiers broke rank, and vaulted the barrier. "Sprint!" I yelled, dropping a trip mine. It was painted grey, so it blended in with the streets. I risked a single look back, and saw one Japanese soldiers trying to stop his comrades. He knew. Sick of fighting, he turned and began to run the opposite way. The flow of soldiers caught him, and he was dragged along. Suddenly, a gunshot went off, and the man's body went limp. They kill someone who tried to protect them. My men began to reach the end of the bridge. Zac was among them, and beckoned them to keep moving. The Japs weren't firing. I stopped, as my army left the bridge, and began running down the streets. Placing my hands behind my head, and dropping my gun, I stepped off the bridge, right in the middle of the road. All the soldiers stood, and looked at suspiciously. Then it hit me. There were other spies among us. "Shit." I whispered. The men all looked at me, and I gestured with my head toward the beeping lights. No-one registered recognition. I took another step backwards, until I reached the sidewalk, where I sat. One of the men took a step. And the bombs exploded.

--

Almost one hundred thousand Japanese soldiers were caught in the explosions. The bridge collapsed, as huge pieces of the road were ripped up. All the way up to the sidewalk was caught in the explosion, and flying debris smashed into the building behind me, and I ran through it, evading the explosion with my life. Just. The entire side of the building was decimated. Steel, glass, road, rock and flame all surrounded me, as I sprinted through the building, and into the next. The first building collapsed as I spun around, landing where the bridge should have been. Several seconds past, as they felt like minutes dragged into hours, as the smoke cleared, and the chaos settled. I tried to find the metal sheets we'd driven into the bridge. And bodies. I looked for bodies, and rubble and debris. But there was nothing. The only testament to a huge battle was the huge building that had been toppled, and a massive crater. I looked at myself. I was covered with blood, dirt and grime. I was covered in it. I walked slowly into the middle of where the street used to be, when I realized my leg was bleeding. So was my face, and my shoulder. Pieces of debris and rubble had sliced my limbs and face. They stung, but were not serious. The blood slid slowly down my leg, taking pieces of dirt and filth with it.

--

I looked around, as men emerged from the shadows or the ruined buildings and wreckage. It was then that the suffering my army had received was evident. Many men had severe cases of shell shock, others were wounded from stray bullets, and covered in blood. Others had to rely on the people around them to even move. Zac, Shawn and Alfie all stood around me. I gestured to all the wounded men, and shock spread over all three faces. I stepped forward, bellowing a command. "Let the wounded lie!" I watched as a wave of nods and appreciation swept the army. All but about one thousand men fell to the ground , some slowly, others quickly, to avoid prolonged pain. I surveyed the thousand men. They were battle-hardened, and ready to fight. "The rest," I began. "Come with me."

--

I stood at the helm of a dramatically smaller army, as I faced the beach. It had only taken us a few minutes, but now we were facing the western shore of O'ahu. Another Japanese force had assembled, far smaller than the last. We knew they'd heard about the horrific defeat on the bridge. I had, accidentally, annihilated their assault, and possibly saved the state of islands. Possibly even the eastern side of the country. The morale was at rock-bottom low. The men were horrified, as another soldier described it too them, slightly twisting the tale, as I moved to just within earshot. The soldier put an apocalyptic spin in the tale, but it was mostly correct. I stepped forward, onto the beach, my gun resting on my shoulder, the sand crunching beneath my feet. The men looked up. "And I'm the one that did it." I told them, in Japanese. "They saw it coming. Bombs lined the bridge." I stopped, looking back to the buildings. "Fire!" I yelled, and my men jumped from the cover, holding rocket launchers and machine guns. I opened fire as well. "Good bye." I said, as the men were slaughtered. At the cease fire, one man was still alive, bullets embedded in his ribs. Blood pooled around him, sand filling the wounds, as he tried to crawl away. I knelt beside him. "Tell me everything, and I can let you live." He looked up at me, expressions of torture glistening in them. "We have a barge. A huge one. But, you killed all the soldiers on it. It could sail all the survivors aboard it to the mainland, in several hours." I placed my hand on the man's head, whispering. "Help is coming." I assured him. "Alfie!" I yelled. "Get a medic!" He nodded, and one of the men stepped forward, carrying a box of medical tools. He ran to me, and saw the Japanese soldier. "What?"

--

I placed my gun under the man's chin. " he is under MY protection. If he dies, you'll be going to hell." The man nodded. I pushed my gun forward, digging it into his skull. "AND back." He swallowed, nervously and nodded. "Good. Get to work." The medic knelt, and examined the man's wounds. "Need help?" I asked. He nodded. "Lay out a mattress of some kind." I grabbed a huge towel from nearby, and lay it out, followed by another. "There, done." I said, and the medic smiled. "Get him onto it." He told me, and I extended a hand to the man. He grabbed it, and stood to his feet, painfully. Luckily, only two bullets had hit him. One had skimmed his ribs, and emerged the other side, leaving a clean wound, and the other had just left a small ditch in his skin. The medic sighed when he saw the wounds from another angle. I lay the man on the towels, and our medic cleaned his wounds. After patching both gun shot holes, the medic stood back to survey his handiwork. "Should hold. But, he'll live." I nodded. "Good." I helped the man to his feet, and the pain seemed to have numbed. "You any better?" I asked. He nodded, smiling. "You saved my life, sir." I nodded. "Yep. All in a day's work." I said, sarcastically. "Would I have the honour of protecting you, in battles to come?" He asked, deadly serious. "It's all about honour with you people." I said in English, contemplating. Finally, I nodded. "Yes, if you wish."

--

Zac, Shawn, Alfie, Shinra; the Japanese traitor and I all stood at the beach head, watching Japanese boats sail into the harbour. "This is where it all ends." I said, bluntly, and the others agreed. "Hide." Shawn and Alfie retreated back to the streets, where several rocket launchers lay about. Zac ran to the other side of the beach, and Shinra and I hid in the Japanese camp, among the carnage. One of the boats reached the shore, and I lay motionless in the bloody sand, clutching a radio. "Don't fire!" I whispered to Shawn and Alfie, through the radio, as two men stepped off. Zac was also lying still, a large sniper concealed beneath several inches of sand. The two Japs strode quickly over to the Japanese camp. I held in the radio button. "Fire." I whispered to Zac. My gaze shot to his position, as the sniper flashed twice, and two red hot bullets emerged. The first bullet struck it's target in the head. The second missed the man's neck by less than half an inch. He flinched, momentarily. This fatal error was followed up by two other man rushing onto the beach. Zac fired again. This time, the bullet struck it's target, carrying the body several inches through the air, before dropping it. The two other men stood, gob smacked. "Again." I told Zac, through the radio. My glance shot to the boat. Two others were close behind. We had left it too late. Even if Shawn and Alfie fired their rockets at the boats, the survivors could swim to shore. It was worth the shot though. I clutched the radio tightly, as two more of Zac's bullets spiralled out of the gun barrel, and into the men. "Fire!" I yelled into the radio. Barely a second later, two rockets flew past Shinra and I, slamming into the two further off boats. Both vehicles were hit, as several men from both were through overboard, into the frothy water. "On three, to your feet!" I yelled to Shinra. He nodded. "One." Another rocket flew past, slamming into the beached boat. The two men on the beach dropped to the ground. "Two." A second, wounded boat hit the beach fast, throwing several of it's crew to the deck.

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"Three!" I yelled. Shinra pushed himself to his feet. I opened fire on the second boat, as a man sprinted off, carrying a small machine gun. My bullets peppered the ground around him, before one hit his leg. He dropped to the ground, as Zac fired at men running onto the shore. Two more of Shawn and Alfie's rockets sped past. Another quickly followed. The first boat was hit three times, the first rocket causing the most damage. It slammed into the side of the boat, just above the water line, tearing a massive chunk out of the steel armour. The second hit the deck, tearing a section of it too pieces. The third spiralled around, before hitting the top. As the smoke cleared from the explosions, Zac fired at a man running from the wounded vessel. His bullet struck the man right on, throwing him into the water. My gaze shot to the other two boats. I swore under my breath, as almost one hundred men mobilised on the beach. "Shinra!" I yelled. "Grenades!" The two of us scavenged through the camp, before I found a large crate of grenades. Shawn and Alfie's rockets flew deathly close to the camp, and I flinched. The two missiles hit a newly erected riot shield, that barely withstood the explosive siege. Zac still lay almost motionless, slightly readjusting his sniper. One by one, he picked off three men holding the shield. The horde suddenly opened fire in all directions. Hundreds of bullets flew around the beach. Zac ducked behind a small dune, as it was peppered with bullets. "Dammit!" I yelled, grabbing a grenade. "At will!" I screamed to Shinra, as I lobbed the first grenade. Shinra grabbed two handfuls of grenades, rolled them up in a blanket, and left the camp. "Shinra?" I asked.

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"Shinra!" I screamed after him, but too late. He was on the beach head, sprinting for the Japanese forces. One of the Japanese soldiers watched him from the corner of his eye. The man opened fire on Shinra. One of his bullet hit Shinra in the knee, before he dived behind a sand dune. "Bastard!" I yelled, lobbing another grenade. The grenade buried itself in the sand, as Shawn and Alfie pushed the Japanese group toward it. I jumped up. "Die!" I screamed. I fired several times, aimlessly into the sand, to turn the Japs toward the grenade more. They were protecting someone, and would die to do so. I kept firing, until my magazine was empty. "Dammit!" I yelled, dropping to the sand, searching for more ammo. Suddenly, a grenade landed about three yards away from me. I watched it land, and ran to the side, sand filling my clothes. The grenade exploded, throwing sand several feet into the air, and a body. A plan quickly formulated in my head. I screamed in agony, and, as the sand settled, and the body landed, I pretended wounded and dying.

--

I watched satisfaction crawl over the Japanese faces. Slowly, I crawled over to my gun, as they redirected their fire. Shinra still lay wounded behind the sand dune, and Zac had abandoned his sniper. Shawn and Alfie continued firing rockets, but their ammunition wasn't unlimited. Several Japanese bodies littered the beach. My gaze shifted to the third boat, as almost twenty other man came charging forward, all in a rushed manner. This made it easier for us to pick the off, but harder to kill in one blow. I dived, grabbing the radio, and slamming the button. "Fire at the main force!" I yelled into it. Shawn had th radio strapped to his neck, so he could hear every command, and my yelling came unexpectedly. He winced in pain, dropping his rocket, and firing accidentally. The missile hit one of the boats, and took three of the reinforcements, who were still running off, down. Blood came streaking down a fourth's face, as he ran through the debris and smoke. The beach had become a battlefield. Five men who waged a war against an army. But a single move by the Japanese could destory us all, and in turn, O'ahu. Shinra lay panting still, the bag of grenades resting in his lap. "Shinra!" I screamed. "Throw them!" I looked back at the main Japanese group. Slowly but surely, they were being pushed back toward the grenade. "Fire once more!" I ordered, into the radio, now lying at Shawn's feet, after the last painful incident. Shawn nodded, and fired, before retreating behind a piece of large rubble. The reinforcements, now reduced to fifteen men, began firing at Shawn and Alfie, as they ran to hide. Bullets peppered the ground, just behind Alfie's feet. As he turned the corner, he slipped, and the bullets caught up to him. Most of them missed, but one hit Alfie's leg, and a second hit his chest. Within seconds, he had lost a lot of blood. "Shit." I said to myself, watching the events unfold.

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Alfie dragged himself behind the rubble, painfully. Zac suddenly opened fire with a grenade launcher he found in the sand, hiding a small pistol in his pocket. The Japanese reinforcements were distracted by this new threat, and several of them were killed. Once again, I ran to the grenade box, and began lobbing grenades, trying to direct the fire of the main Japanese assault team. About 7 of the main assault team had been killed, and almost half their reinforcements. But, we had two men down. Shinra just lay behind the sand dune, panting, almost as if he was dead. He had, however, momentarily stopped the blood flow. The sand around him, however was bloody, and dirty. "Shinra!" I screamed, lobbing another grenade. The man registered response, and nodded. He forced himself onto one knee, and grabbed the bag of grenades. Standing weakly, he stepped, and stumbled. Correcting himself, he climbed over the sand dune, pulling two hand guns out of his pocket. "No!" I screamed. He started to sprint toward the assault team. "No!" I screamed louder. He couldn't hear me. He kept sprinting, holding the guns in the air, firing. The Japs were suddenly bombarded by bullets, and several men collapsed, as Shinra's perfect aim was put to good use. But, suddenly, all the Japanese fire turned to him. Several bullet shit Shinra in the stomach, sprouting blood to the surface of his skin. "You're killing yourself!" I screamed. But, he had accomplished his goal. He reached the assault team, placing one gun in the bag of grenades, and the other toward a commander like man. He said something to them in Japanese, and all their guns were lowered. I strained to listen. "Fire. And we all die."

--

The beach went eerily silent. "Move." Shinra said, more an order than a request. Silently, the Japanese soldiers parted, giving him free access to the commander. "So we meet again, brother." Shinra's words hit my like a bullet. Now, in the dead silence, I could hear everything. Shinra dropped the bag, and hugged the commander. I was horrified. He had used me. He released the embrace. "Now, recommence the attack." Shinra ordered. "Bastard!" I screamed. I grabbed a high caliber rifle, and just before the man huddle up, I fired. The first bullet missed Shinra's head by an inch, and he flinched, along with the rest of his pitiful army. I moved my scope, and fired one more time. The reinforcements reached the main group, as time, for the final time slowed to a deadly halt. The bullet carved through the air, as a third man greeted Shinra with a handshake. In the same moment, explosions rocked the boats, and I realized the Japs planned to stay. This was what was left of their current army. The rest were dead, or back at home, in Japan. No-one had expected a total wipe-out. By five men, no less. The Japanese commander looked toward me, shocked to find me still alive. Then the bullet struck. But it missed Shinra. It missed the commander. And it missed the third man. It had fallen short.

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But none of them were the target. It took almost a second for the bullet to cause any damage. In that single second, I dropped the gun, and ran. Several of the Japanese men fired at me. It was the last thing they did. The grenades exploded. All of them. Nearly 100 high explosives, in a contained area. The blast was devastating. One hundred and ten Japanese soldiers died almost instantly. The explosion reached the boats, tearing them apart. Sand erupted hundreds of metres into the air. Zac and I reached the streets before the explosion wiped out everything on the beach. Almost one hundred square metres had been destroyed. Alfie was lying in pain, clutching the wound. Shawn was on his feet, staring in awe, and Zac stood beside me. We watched the spoils of our efforts. We all had minor wounds, or worse. Even had a bullet embedded in my rib. Alfie was worst of, and blood was pooling around him. "Guys!" He screamed, in desperation.

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We all turned, as the smoke cleared, and the sand settled. He was dying, quickly. "Don't try saving me." He said, like a final wish. "It was an honour." He coughed, blood erupting from within his mouth. He fell back onto the ground. "I'll miss you. All of you." Zac knelt also. "Know that you didn't die in vain. Today, not a single American did." He nodded, a weak smile crossing his face. Tears began welling up in my eyes. It was hard for me. It was almost the exact same situation as when my mother had died. "Don't leave." I whispered. Alfie overheard me, but not the others. The dying patriot grabbed my arm, and pulled himself up, next to my ear. Then he whispered something to me, that I'll never forget. No-one else heard it, but Zac saw it. Then, he fell backwards, and coughed. Blood was surrounding the brave soldier. "I'll never forget you." I said, a tear rolling down my sore, bruised and bleeding face. Finally, he died. His pain was over. I picked the body up, with the last of my energy. Blood dripped off he fresh corpse. No, I told myself. Not a corpse. A memory. A warrior. A man.

-Epilogue-

I stepped onto the boat, carrying a single bag of luggage. Alfie had been given a proper burial and funeral several days before hand. The war had ended almost two weeks ago. Zac stood next to me, ready to fly home, back to Australia. My flight ticket was in my back pocket, and I was going with him. Shawn had chosen to stay behind. He was with us now, waving us goodbye. "But, war is all around you." I said. "Don't you want to escape?' I asked him. He shook his head. "These people need all the help they can get." I nodded, acknowledging what my friend had said. The war had torn apart buildings, weapons, people and an island. But it tightened my friendships with the two men I now considered closest.I watched Shawn wave and walk off. Zac turned to me, smiling. "Time to go?" He asked. The boat was to take us to what was left of the airport. A single plane had survived, in perfect condition, and it was to take us to Australia. We were clean, and unarmed, ready to start a new life. Both of us were only in our twenties: I was twenty-six, and Zac was twenty-four. I looked at him. "Sounds good." He chuckled.

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Almost 20 hours later, we landed. Australia was beautiful. We had landed at the Brisbane airport. Zac was smiling, as he slipped his sunnies on. "Time to get laid, eh?" He asked, jokingly. "In your dreams." I said, returning the joke. "They're all mine."

-END-

.: Final note :.

This IS being re-written, to be bigger, better and more epic.

Plus, I wanna make it full of win.